Writing A Great Script Fast In A Nutshell Workbook Part 1 of 2 .. .. .. .. . .. . .. ... . . .. . .. ... .. .. . .. . .. ... ..Part 2 Step 1: Introduction Questions To Consider: Do you want to write a script, make a film and/or write a blueprint for a novel using this online step-by-step story engine process? If you want to write a script or make a film do you want to do a short, feature or series? What is your goal in finishing this story project? To get a job, to win an award, to make money or raise awareness about an issue? If you are planning on making the film yourself which digital filmmaking tools are you planning to use DV, 2D, 3D or combinations? Step 2.2: Story Structure Sentence It is a story about a protagonist (lead character) who wants something (plot goal) that forces him/her to take action. He/she meets with an escalating array of conflicts (obstacles) leading to a climax and resolution. Protagonist: Lead character and focus of the plot Antagonist: Character or thing standing in the way of the protagonist accomplishing his or her goals Any quick ideas for a great original lead protagonist and/or antagonist placed into the above story sentence? Step 3: Favorite Main Characters List 5 possible main characters for a film you would love to see in a story. Attach an age, sex, location, occupation, visual style and dreamcast with a favorite actor. Make sure these are characters you would love to see in a film. Use the brainstorming lists below to get more ideas to fill into this example chart: Body Type | Age | Sex | Occupation | Location | Visual Style | Dreamcast | Dog head detective | 32 | M | detective | Prague | Goth | Nicolas Cage | Bigfoot | 16 | F | shaman | Mt Shasta | New Age | Angelina Jolie | Tall blond athletic | 28 | M | archeologist | Peru | High tech explorer | Peter Weller | Skinny NYC Party Girl | 26 | F | shock performance artist | NYC | Hip NYC artist | Naomi Watts | Polar bear | 9 | M | survivor | Alaska | Intuit Indian | Owen Wilson | Occupational Ideas: Pick ones that seem fun visually or match characters you might want to develop. Feel free to combine occupations such as a Circus Clown Professional Surfer, Matchmaker Wizard or a Tour Guide Astronaut. Astronaut | Musician | Professional soccer player | Talk-show host | Dictator | Hunter | Housewife | Fashion designer | Cowboy | Professional Surfer | Bum | Student | Circus clown | Cook | Matchmaker | Wizard | Researcher | Tour guide | Shaman | Slave | Belly dancer | Sheriff | Spaceship commander | Teacher | Reporter | Soldier | Psychiatrist | Gangster | Guru | Hairdresser | Poet | Witchdoctor | Magician | Construction worker | Burglar | Stockbroker | Government employee | Investment banker | Novelist | Pirate | Policeman | Lifeguard | Hands-on healer | Computer programmer | Game designer | Butler | Astrologer | Advertising executive | Astronomer | Accountant | Car thief | Knight | King/Queen | Clerk | Mailman | Fireman | Hit man | Retired Archeologist | Chemist | Congressman | Cartoonist | Model | Clown | Comedian | Wrestler | Veterinarian | Priest | Detective | Dentist | Doctor | Witch | Lawyer | Artist | Plumber | DJ/VJ | Student | Mortician | Vagabond | Warrior | Editor | Explorer | Fisherman | Fortune teller | Politician | Engineer | Landscaper | Actor | Racecar driver | Painter | President | Visual Styles/Attitudes: What one or two words would best describe the appearance of your character style wise? French Chic | Hippie | Student | Punk | Biker | Trucker | Goth | 1950's Cocktail Hour | Techno | Yuppie | Small Town | Native Indian | Country | Beachy | Four Seasons | New Age | Nerd | Hot | Nervous | Servant | Dad | Old Money | Bookish | Dirty | Dreamcasting: Attach a famous actor to dreamcast your main character idea. Feel free to change their real ages or even use dead ones to describe their essence. If you are thinking about an animated character dreamcast for the voice actor. Female Actors: Angelina Jolie | Drew Barrymoore | Meryl Streep | Marilyn Monroe | Lucille Ball | Angela Lansbury | Elizabeth Taylor | Dolly Parton | Nicole Kidman | Kathy Bates | Cameron Diaz | Sissy Spacek | Halle Berry | Diane Lane | Reese Witherspoon | Shirley MacLaine | Angelica Huston | Jodie Foster | Kate Winslet | Julia Roberts | Jennifer Lopez | Parker Posey | Catherine Zeta Jones | Kate Hudson | Gwyneth Paltrow | Whoopie Goldberg | Sandra Bullock | Uma Thurman | Claire Danes | Goldie Hawn | Naomi Watts | Sigourney Weaver | Oprah Winfrey | Kristen Dunst | Male Actors: Jack Nicholson | Samuel L. Jackson | Anthony Hopkins | Harrison Ford | Jeff Goldblum | Christopher Walken | Ben Affleck | Val Kilmer | Bruce Lee | Sean Penn | Billy Bob Thornton | Nicholas Cage | Richard Gere | Clint Eastwood | Ed Harris | Kevin Costner | Jackie Chan | Tom Cruise | Robin Williams | Billy Crystal | Keanu Reeves | Arnold Schwarzenegger | Bruce Willis | Michael Douglas | Leonardo DeCaprio | Matthew McConaughey | Tom Hanks | Denzel Washington | James Woods | Edward Norto | Brad Pitt | Owen Wilson | John Travolta | Ryan Gosling | Make sure your Top 5 Possible Leading Character Ideas are ones you would love to see in a story! 1.Age/Sex/Body Type: Occupation: Location: Visual Style: Dreamcast With Famous Actor: 2.Age/Sex/Body Type: Occupation: Location: Visual Style: Dreamcast With Famous Actor: 3.Age/Sex/Body Type: Occupation: Location: Visual Style: Dreamcast With Famous Actor: 4.Age/Sex/Body Type: Occupation: Location: Visual Style: Dreamcast With Famous Actor: 5.Age/Sex/Body Type: Occupation: Location: Visual Style: Dreamcast With Famous Actor: Step 6: Film World Settings What film worlds or settings have you always wanted to see in a film or story? List your Top 5 Favorite Film World Settings with dates, visual styles and a few adjectives to really see these locations. Think of places you have always wanted to see in film. These sets do not have to relate to the characters you just did but may be places some of them would live too. If you are making the film yourself, think also of local settings you could shoot or existing footage you already have such as DV and photos. For example: • NYC 3012 as a green hippie Utopia city with a gold beehive looking visual style” • Mars surface during an expedition • Ancient Egypt at it’s height List Your Top 5 Favorite Film World Settings: 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. Step 5: Favorite Subjects What are your top 5 Favorite Subjects or areas of interest? • Hobbies • Subjects you like to study or research • Mystical creatures • Favorite subjects in books, movies, comic books • Favorite myths or cultures • Things you like to do for fun • Places or historical events • Urban Legends List Your Top 5 Favorite Subjects: 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. Step 6: Story Flavors/Genres List your Top 5 Favorite Story Flavors using the list below to help you come up with ideas. Think also of combining Story Flavors such an animated supernatural comedy or a romantic crime thriller. Action/adventure. Big adventures, hero survival, daring stunts, and action sequences. Animation. Far-out or surreal visual elements with objects that can turn into other things. These stories usually show us something real actors or sets cannot do as easily, such as talking animals or living toys. Ensemble. Stories about groups of characters unified by same theme. Experimental. Avant-garde rule breakers. Creating films that audiences may not even understand. Biography. Find meaning of the person's life (theme), and make the person the hero (or anti-hero) in his or her own tale. Buddy. Friendship or nonromantic close relationships developed over a series of events. City symphony. Films about a single location with different perspectives, characters, events, and time frames. Comedy. Show how characters in the best situations still manage to mess up or create fish out of water tales. These stories are often used to showcase the brutality of social life. Crime. Murder mystery, detectives solving cases, reporters investigating crimes, prison stories, heists, spy stories, criminals/victims getting revenge, courtroom dramas, organized crime. Disillusionment. Protagonist's view of life changes from positive to negative. Documentary. True story about event, people, or place. Drama. Passion, madness, dreams of human heart. Education. Protagonist changes worldview from negative to positive by learning something new. Fantasy. New-world rules playing with time, space, and laws of nature. Historical. Stories from the past often work great to show us some themes of our present situations at a comfortable distance. Horror. Bad, evil, scary, creepy things. Journey. Trip, road trip, or travel tale. Love story. What gets in the way of romantic love? Maturation. Coming-of-age story. Mockumentary. Fiction that looks like a real documentary. Music video. Short film for a song and hopefully some story, theme, or context. Musical. Songs used to tell stories from any genre. What are the new digitally enhanced musicals going to look like? Myth. Hero journeys, ancestral memories, prehistory moral conduct, or urban legends. Obsession/addiction/temptation. Willpower versus obsessions/addictions/temptations. Personal anthology. Video diaries, personal events. Postmodern. No single lead protagonist with distortion of time and space. Punishment. Good protagonist turns bad and is >punished. Psychodrama. Madmen, serial killers, crazy people, nuthouses. Reality shows. Real-life, voyeuristic-style stories. TV shows such as The Osbournes or Survivor. Redemption. Protagonist goes from morally bad to good. Science fiction. Possible future, unknown past. Societal problems. Political, racial, medical, educational, business, environmental, family. Sports. Big character change in relationship to sporting event. Supernatural. Spiritual or freaky occurrence in unseen realms. Tragedy. Cautionary tales, somber themes, catastrophic characters. War. Combat, prowar/antiwar. Western. Wild West. Good versus evil. Gunfights, cowboys, bank robberies, cattle drives, Indians, ranches, horses and saloons.List Your Top 5 Favorite Story Flavors or Genres: 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. Step 7: Digital Filmmaking Techniques If you are making the film what types of software or digital filmmaking tools do you want to use? - Digital Video
- 2D Animation
- 3D Animation
- Photo collage virtual sets
- 2D Southpark-style hand-drawn characters
- 3D sets such as fantasy settings, prehistoric places, or anything else
- Bluescreen characters
- Hand made and painted hand puppets
- 3D characters – anything goes!
DV actors on DV sets - Old hand held stop motion dolls
- 3D FX such as tornados, fire, tidal waves, smoke
- DV actors on 2D photo sets
- 3D particles
- Cut up paper doll parts
List Your Top 5 Favorite Digital Filmmaking Techniques: 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. Step 8: Story Sentences Fill in the following chart with the Top 5 Lists you just created: Characters | Settings | Subjects | Genres | Software | Bigfoot teenage girl, new age shaman, 16 Angelina Jolie | lost underground ancient city | Bigfoots | Comedy | 3D bigfoots | Tall blond Nordic archeologist 32, explorer, Peter Weller | Prague 1992 | Lost cities | Animated supernatural comedy | 2D photo collage sets | NYC party girl 28 hip techno, shock artist, Naomi Watts | Tunnel crypts under Paris 2007 | shamans | Romantic myth thriller | 2D lightening bolt FX | Polar bear boy 9, fat orphan, Owen Wilson | Inside a cat's brain | Native Americans | Buddy spiritual adventure | bluescreen actors | Dog headed Gothic detective, 32, Nicolas Cage | Lightening bolt storm | crop circles | Mockumentary horror | hand drawn 2D characters | Create 3 Story Concept Sentences using the above chart to fill in these spaces: It is a story about a Top 5 Character who lives in a Top 5 Film World/Setting. This story explores the subject of Top 5 Subject in a Top 5 Story Flavor using Top 5 Software. Be flexible with how you phrase the sentence to make it sound best. Feel free to add things not on the lists if you come up with better ideas. Your goal is to end up with at least one Favorite Story Sentence you would love to see as a film. Here are some more examples: It is a story about a 3D teenage bigfoot girl who lives in a lost underground city. This story explores the subject of shamanism in a supernatural animated comedy using 3D bigfoots on 3D sets. It is a story about a dog headed gothic detective living in Prague investigating a series of bigfoot sightings in an animated crime thriller comedy using bluescreen actors, 2D photo collage sets and 3D bigfoots. It is a story about a fat polar bear orphan boy living in Alaska trying to survive global warming in an animated comedy using 3D creatures, 3D sets and some DV sets. Pick your favorite Story Sentence to develop for the rest of this Writing A Great Script Fast Nutshell Sample Workshop. Make sure it is a story idea you would stand in line in the rain on a dark cold night to see! Step 9: Adding Plot Goals Choose 1-2 main plot goals for your Final Story Idea Sentence: Plot Goal #1: Plot Goal #2 (optional): Make sure the goals sound fun visually and see how you can use favorite subjects or goals. Be specific about the goal such as what type of race they want to win. To slay monster | To win the race | To rule the world | To stop a bomb | To defeat an enemy | To win political office | To become king/queen | To get revenge | To save the world | To cure disease | To stop natural disaster | To fall in love | To get the girl/guy | To solve a crime | To solve a mystery | To steal something | To win war | To stop war | To get rich | To advance spiritually | To become famous | To become successful | To blackmail someone | To get someone to do something | To get someone to do something | To find meaning in life | To solve murder | To catch a killer | To solve/fix a problem | To understand something | To learn a new skill | To become a top warrior | To become a leader | To fight for a just cause | To do what is right | To help people | To find treasure | To get around the system | To stop a bad thing from happening | To become a better person | To evolve to a higher state of being | To survive a dangerous vision quest | To travel to distant lands | To prove a theory | To get a promotion | To get a date | To explore new territory | To fix broken transportation | To invent a new device | To make something new | To have a successful art show/event | To save a current relationship | To defeat evil | | | | | | | | | | | | Step 10: Antagonists Who or what is standing in the way of you character accomplishing the plot goal you just chose? This antagonist could be a madman, boss, family member, teacher, enemy, competitor or organization. You want to create a great original antagonist - think back to the antagonists in your favorite films or stories to get ideas. Competitor | Madman | Pirate | Outlaw | Monster | Natural disaster | Family member | Authority figure | Boss | Commander | Lawyer | Evil person | Protagonist himself/herself | Bad alien | Corporation or head of corporation | Someone blackmailing someone | Robot | Cursed object | Social pressure | Criminal | Spirit | Leader | The system | The police | Enemy | The government | Local bully | A teacher or mentor | Organization or head of organization | Dangerous animal | Thug or gang | Characters with different viewpoints | Character seeking revenge | Disease | Antagonist Idea For Your Story: How is the plot goal for this antagonist in opposition with the protagonist’s plot goal? Step 11: Plot, Character & Theme Choose a one word theme for your story then explain how you are going to make it original and specific (desire leads to suffering): Themes from Feature Films to study and get ideas: • Alien: Fear of the unknown. • Alien 2: The strength of motherhood. • American Beauty: Desire leads to suffering. • Antz: Think for yourself • Apocalypse Now: There is a fine line between insanity and sanity. • Bad Lieutenant: Redemption of a lost corrupt man. • Brazil: Consequences of individuality in a totalitarian dictatorship. • Boogie Nights: Self-delusion. • Buckaroo Bonzai: Superhero with a pure heart can see evil. • Casablanca: Loss of love for some greater cause. • Citizen Kane: Exploration of personality; who was Kane? • Clockwork Orange: Violence is a cost of individuality and non-individuals have a loss of soul. • Dangerous Liaisons: Courtship as combat. • Dr. Strangelove: Exploration of systems and their crushing of individuals. • Evil Dead 2: Triumph of hero. • Fargo: Treasure the little things in life. • Fatal Attraction: Cost of deception. • The Graduate: Alienation of 60’s youth. • Magnolia: Forgiveness in Los Angeles. • Memento: How humans construct and deconstruct reality. • Princess Mononoke (2D): Everything is alive and connected in our environment. • Pulp Fiction: Seeking out redemption in underworld with emphasis on loyalty. • Requiem For a Dream: Addiction to dreams. • Run Lola Run: Exploration of how the power of love can change fate. • Shrek (3D): Seeing inner beauty. When you can love someone else you can love yourself. • Star Wars: A hero coming of age taking on lost father’s path. • Terminator: Man being destroyed by their own machines. • The Bad And The Beautiful: Creativity and corruption. • The Big Chill: Warmth of friendship against cold world. • The Blair Witch: Arrogance of youth lacking respect for themselves, surroundings, and subject. • The Celebration (DV): Dark secrets destroy families. • The Cruise (DV): The beauty of Manhattan. • Lord Of The Rings (1): Even the smallest person can change the world. Pure heart needed to wield great power. • The Matrix: Rise of superman against the system of the future. • The Piano: The need for creative expression. • The Remains Of The Day: Individual vs. place within class society. Class society destroying individual. • The Usual Suspects: Construction and reconstruction of memory and identity. • There’s Something About Mary: Love is more important than beauty. Struggles with perfection. • Things To Do In Denver When You're Dead: Honor among thieves. • Trainspotting: Conflict between life and death urges. • Toy Story (3D): Being the most favorite toy. • Waking Life (DV): Exploration of lucid dreaming state. What is real verses what is illusion. • Wallstreet: Greed leads to corruption. • Wizard of OZ: The importance of home and family • You Can Count On Me: Loves evokes love Theme | Symbolic Image Description in Script | Treasure the little things in life | Character eating fresh pie savoring every bite. | Alienation of youth | Young character looking out of place at grownup party. | Desire leads to suffering | Character getting beat up trying to get what he wants. | Exploration of character | Searching for meaning of last word uttered on deathbed. | The blurry line between sanity and insanity | Show all the characters acting crazy but functional. | Violence as cost of individuality | Hip, artsy, unique criminal characters. | Cost of deception | Pet cat found hanging on clothesline by antagonist. | Power of love can change fate | Character screaming so loud that he wins game of chance to save lover. | War changes people | Main characters all experience extreme changes as result of war. Some characters die, some become very scarred and others get very resourceful. | One Word Theme for your story: How is your theme original and specific? List 3 ways to show story events being controlled by the theme in your story: 1) 2) 3) Step 12: Character Traits A character trait is anything that determines the way a character sees the world and how the character thinks, speaks, and acts. Possible Best Traits | Traits | Traits | Possible Worst Traits | Champion ________ | Intelligent | Airhead | Insane | Professional ________ | Fake | Athletic | Addicted | Master ________ | Aloof | Activist | Fearful | Top _____ | Affectionate | Moody | Worrywart | Beatnik | Middle class | Dead inside | Mean | Model ___ | Corporate | Gypsy | Alcoholic | Warrior | Negative | Hippie | Thief | Beautiful | Positive | Intuitive | Poor | Courageous | Cool | Dork | Annoying | Rich | Well educated | Perfectionist | Depressed | Charming | Funny | Loving | Hot tempered | Talented | Peaceful | Irresponsible | Playboy | Prodigy | Worldly | Tough | Stubborn | Survivor | Burned out | High strung | Stressed | Pick one best trait, one worst trait and five others for each of the main characters in your story idea using the spaces below: Protagonist: Antagonist: Mentor: Sidekick: Love Interest: Other Characters: Step 13: Plot Points Write 1-3 sentences for what happens at each of the 9 basic plot points for your story idea: 1) Hook: Start in the middle of a high intensity mess. How could you show your main characters doing what they do best or have them make an exciting visual entrance into your film world? What twists, shocks or surprises could you add to your opening hook (twist ideas: accident kills someone, a shocking truth revealed, key equipment or transportation breaks down, sudden change of plans announced)? 2) Setup: How will you introduce us to your characters, film world, and story? How will you show your character in his or her normal life? The audience needs a chance to get to know your main characters, along with the limits and possibilities of the film world. 3) Inciting incident. What event happens that forces your character to act by choosing a goal and committing to making it happen? 4) Journey Into Unknown: Protagonist sets off to accomplish plot goal leaving what is familiar behind. 5) Investigation: Protagonist searches for goal object or informationencountering lots of Obstacles/conflicts. What are some obstacles or conflicts your characters might face while attempting to accomplish their plot goal in your story idea? 6) Twist: A new plot goal usually emerges at this point because the first goal is accomplished or an unexpected event occurs which changes the focus of the main plot goal. Accident kills someone, a shocking truth revealed, key equipment or transportation breaks down, sudden change of plans announced. 7) Final confrontation. This is a confrontation between two characters, groups or a situation that has been building up during the story Protagonist/antagonist conflicts related to plot goal. 8) Climax. Highest point of intensity and audience interest where the plot reaches a crescendo. What is the big climatic event at the end where we see whether the characters succeed or fail in accomplishing their goals? 9) Resolution. Ties up the loose ends in the story such as who lives, who dies, who gets the girl, and who lives happily ever after. Workbook Part 2 |